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Sitting in my kitchen
drops ping off the pain
and as I stared outside
he was walking in the rain
His figure blurred by mist
a shadow way, way off
his outline steadily bigger
his footsteps never stop
And then without a warning
right in my front yard
he came to a calm halt
and stared, into my heart
Then the shadow turned around
and the rain drops ceased to fall
the sun poked out of clouds
I wondered if he was real at all
The man out in the rain
to this day touched my soul
and every time I hear the drops
I wonder if he'll show
drops ping off the pain
and as I stared outside
he was walking in the rain
His figure blurred by mist
a shadow way, way off
his outline steadily bigger
his footsteps never stop
And then without a warning
right in my front yard
he came to a calm halt
and stared, into my heart
Then the shadow turned around
and the rain drops ceased to fall
the sun poked out of clouds
I wondered if he was real at all
The man out in the rain
to this day touched my soul
and every time I hear the drops
I wonder if he'll show
Literature
Please Say I Am
Please Say I Am
Sheltered.
Nurtured.
Curious and young.
Following, perhaps even stalking.
Stumbling with thoughts that won’t leave my lips.
My eyes see.
Your eyes can’t or won’t.
I don’t know.
When I spy on you,
My heart feels something.
It feels like hot sunshine
Burning yellow bubbles that burst and burn.
That is good, right?
Then sitting in my darkness,
I whisper your name.
I hope you hear me.
When will you escape your madness?
Will you ever know?
Am I meant to be your girl?
Please say I am…
Please.
Literature
Irretrievably Broken
What can you do when the person who is supposed to love you the most doesn't care at all?
What should you do when the person who is supposed to have your back at all times stabs you in it instead?
What does it say when all the people who were supposed to be friends to both of you kept their silence?
I may forgive one day, but I will never trust again.
Literature
Now That You're Not Near
I've never felt the cold
More than I do now
Cold was my friend
It comforted me
Or maybe that was just you
Shielding me from its bitter bite
I've never feared the dark
More than I do now
Darkness was chaos
But I reveled in its mystery
Or maybe that was you
Leading the way to the light
I've never hated the sun
As much as I do now
The sun is warmth
Something I have no need for
Now that you're gone
I no longer wish to see the light of day
I never cared for the future
As much as I should have
I had been happy as we were
You were always by my side
But now that you're not here
Our future will never come
Suddenly I realize I've always felt th
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A lovely poem of wonderment and love. I do hate it, but I also do not love it. It seems a little chppy, like the rhymes may have been forced. It also seems like it has lines where it does not flow properly. I like the wording! This poem is very good but some of the stanzas could be remastered to make it flow better. With time, you will be a very great writer! Keep up the good work!